Children's Book - Day 5

I was feeling a little more creative today, so I tried my hand at trying to fix my story a bit and create a few more verses. I had a little success but since I wasn’t truly inspired, it took much longer than it should have. I am happy with where the story is going, although I’m a bit worried it’s getting to be too much and not as simple as I would like it to be. We’ll see what happens at the end I guess.